Nerve nerve where are you going?
I hope not to the brain
I hate to tell you that the brain drained !!
The brain drained without knowledge
The girl never thought that her brain will drain
If she doesn't read!
Brain Brain Why did you decide to drain?
Although she is not standing in the rain.
How are you doing?
where are you?
Maybe you went on a vacation?
Brain Brain how did you drain?
Did you go out while she was asleep?
Why din't you leave a substitute behind?
I know that even your best friend heart
can never ever substitute your work!
Brain Brain where did you go?
I now heard that you are still in place!
Maybe only the knowledge drained
because a brain could never drain!!
Nerve nerve the brain is still in place
why did you stop your journey?
Is it because that I just said
"The Brain Drained??"
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Oh my God, this is excellent. I really loved the way you started each paragraph, it was a natural progression. And the part where you say that is actually the knowledge that drained is simply too good. And fun in the last paragraph, "Is it because that I just said" was subtle humor at its best.
ReplyDeleteGreat work my little boy. You need to show this to your class teacher.
keshav!!!!!! superb da kutti. awaiting more from you :)
ReplyDeleteawesome. good writing. Sequential, Rhyming and thinking out of the box. i have just got a print out to show it to Abhivad. Keshav, keep up the good work and all the best.
ReplyDeletegood job Keshav! love your creativity, keep it up.
ReplyDeleteAwesome!!! Great Job! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGreat Keshav! There is a mini Seuss in you!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job K! Good focus on the theme. keep it going:)
ReplyDeleteJust curious, what made you think of "Brain Drain"?
Thank you everybody for your encouraging words. I will keep up the good work!
ReplyDeletehi kesav,
ReplyDeleteexcellent,keep writing more and more poems.
Keshav, awesome poem, excellent rhyming..great work!! Keep it up...You are going to be the best Poet...:))) Good Luck!!
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ReplyDeleteAwesome... Keshav!!.. I like the Rhyming & Humor in it.
ReplyDeleteBoy!!> You've got some real talent in you!!. Keep writing!!...
Hey Keshav. Gud to see a budding WordsWorth in the family.Keep up the gud work
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